添削お願いします。
英作文に添削お願いします。
I respect Ai Miyazato who is a prefessional golfer.There are several reasons for it.
First, she has a lot of victories, because she is tough.She has won the 1st prize many times from junior high school student until present time.Second, she is good at not only golf but also English.She has taken place in American tour since 2006, so she has spent a lot of time in Amica.At first, she coudn't speak English well, but she can speak it well now.Third, she always care her fashion.She choose her clothes by herself.She has an eye, so she is fashionable.Fourth, she has her motto;"Where there is a will, there is a way."(意志あるところに道はある)This motto strikes to the heart, so I like it.She has her own mind. It is reason why she is tough.For these seasons, I respect Ai Miyazato very much, so I am going to continue supporting her.
お礼
ありがとうございました。なるほど読み手が受けるイメージががらりと変わるのですね。それは驚きでした。とても勉強になりました。