至急！英文の訂正お願いします
ポケモンについての英文を自分で作ったのですが、たぶん文法的に間違っています。
訂正してください、お願いします。
ただ、口頭で読む文章なのでコンマなどは訂正しなくてかまいません
Hello, I’d like to tell you about Pokémon.
You know that Pokémon is very popular game all over the world.
However, you may not know why it is so popular.
Well, I’m going to talk about,
First, the charming of Pokémon characters, second the interesting of Pokémon battle, third variety of enjoyable this game.
First, there are a lot of charming Pokémon in this game.
The number of Pokémon was 151 at first, but now there are more than 670 Pokémon.
For example, cool and strong Pokémon, which loved by boys, cute and pretty Pokémon which loved by girls.
There are Pokémon, which look like animals, insects, and so on.
You will surely find Pokémon of the oneself preference.
Second is the interesting of Pokémon battle.
It’s easy for you to play the Pokémon battle.
You only have to select one skill of four them.
However, you have to think about your Pokémon’s type and rival’s Pokémon’s type.
For example, when your Pokémon’s type is fire, your Pokémon has advantage for leaf type of Pokémon but has disadvantage for water type of Pokémon.
Furthermore, if you want to, you can use item.
The method of the Pokémon battle is simple, but is very deep.
So you are able to enjoy any number of times.
Third, this game has a lot of events.
So, after you clear the game, you can play in many ways.
For example, there will be the person who I obtain all Pokémon, and wants to complete Pokémon illustrated book and,
There will be the person who wants to let one's beloved Pokémon win the championship at a contest.
There will be the person wanting to do a lot of communication play with the friend and,
There will be the person who wants to give the person who wants to collect rare items, a level of Pokémon more.
Even if it is said that there is the way of enjoying approximately the number of Pokémon, it is not exaggeration.
Well, I have talked about the reason with popularity of Pokémon.
Thank you very much.
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お礼
ありがとうございます。 これって男から男への場合もこの表現は使えるんですか！？