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ポケモンについての英文を自分で作ったのですが、たぶん文法的に間違っています。
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Hello, I’d like to tell you about Pokémon.
You know that Pokémon is very popular game all over the world.
However, you may not know why it is so popular.

Well, I’m going to talk about,
First, the charming of Pokémon characters, second the interesting of Pokémon battle, third variety of enjoyable this game.
First, there are a lot of charming Pokémon in this game.
The number of Pokémon was 151 at first, but now there are more than 670 Pokémon.

For example, cool and strong Pokémon, which loved by boys, cute and pretty Pokémon which loved by girls.
There are Pokémon, which look like animals, insects, and so on.
You will surely find Pokémon of the oneself preference.

Second is the interesting of Pokémon battle.
It’s easy for you to play the Pokémon battle.
You only have to select one skill of four them.
However, you have to think about your Pokémon’s type and rival’s Pokémon’s type.
For example, when your Pokémon’s type is fire, your Pokémon has advantage for leaf type of Pokémon but has disadvantage for water type of Pokémon.
Furthermore, if you want to, you can use item.
The method of the Pokémon battle is simple, but is very deep.
So you are able to enjoy any number of times.

Third, this game has a lot of events.
So, after you clear the game, you can play in many ways.
For example, there will be the person who I obtain all Pokémon, and wants to complete Pokémon illustrated book and,
There will be the person who wants to let one's beloved Pokémon win the championship at a contest.
There will be the person wanting to do a lot of communication play with the friend and,
There will be the person who wants to give the person who wants to collect rare items, a level of Pokémon more.
Even if it is said that there is the way of enjoying approximately the number of Pokémon, it is not exaggeration.

Well, I have talked about the reason with popularity of Pokémon.
Thank you very much.
Are there any questions or comments?
Please post them on our class website.

回答No.1

RoseOKWave · ベストアンサー

Hello, I’d like to tell you about Pokémon.
Many people know that Pokemon is a very popular game all over the world, but most people don't know how it has gained in popularity.

Here are some of the reasons.
First, the charms of Pokémon characters.
Second, the appeal of Pokémon Battle.
And third, variety of enjoyable games of Pokemon.

Let's consider these reasons in detail.

First, there are a lot of charming Pokémon characters in this game.
The number of the characters was 151 at first, but now it is over 670.
For example, we can find cool and strong characters which are popular among boys, and cute and pretty ones loved by girls.
There are also some Pokémon characters which look like animals, insects, and so on.
You are sure to find Pokémon characters of your own preference.

Second, let's consider the Pokémon Battle.
It’s easy for you to play Pokémon Battle.
All you have to do is select one of the four "skills."
However, you have to think about your own Pokémon’s type and your competitor’s Pokémon’s type.
For example, when your Pokémon’s type is "fire", it has an advantage over the "leaf" type, but the odds are against you when your competitor has the "water" type.
Also, you can use "items" if you like.
The rules of the Pokémon Battle is simple, but there are lots of things to learn about it.
You'll never get tired of playing the Pokemon Battle.

Third, this game has a lot of "events".
So, after you clear the game, you can play in many ways.
For example, you can get all Pokemon characters.
You can enjoy trying to complete "Pokémon illustrated book."
You may want to let your beloved Pokémon win the championship at a contest.
You can enjoy communicating with your friends through this game.
You may want to collect as many rare "items" as possible, and get to higher levels of Pokemon.　

It is not exaggerating to say that there are as many ways of playing Pokemon as the number of Pokemon characters.

Well, I have talked about why Pokemon has become so popular.
Thank you very much.
Are there any questions or comments?
Please post them on our class website.

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Your English is very good, but there were some sentences whose meanings I didn't understand probably because I know little about Pokemon.
If you find any sentences that do not exactly express your intentions, please post again.
Good luck.