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あと、これは大学入試用です。
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starting foreign language education at a very early age is a good idea.
I'm for this opinion.
There are TWO reasons.First of all,clearly,little children aged up to three can absorb
a lot of information at a rate grown-ups cannot.Responsive to sound,they are very efficient learners of new language,
so they will be able to acquire two languages such as Japanese and English with little difficulty.This will be a good advance,
because they will have more time learning other important subjects,say math,science,histry,and so on.
Second,learning foreign language does not only mean you are learning how to read and write,but it also means
you are studying other culture.It must be great that you know several culture,
because it means you can understand things at global point of view without predudice.Acquiring such perspective is indispensable for people of today.
