【至急】この文章の英文法は合ってますか？

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【至急】この文章の英文法は合ってますか？

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I want to go Canada.
There are two reasons.
First,I am interested Canada’s food culture.
Canada is famous for salmon and berry.
I want to eat many delicious soul meals in Canada.
Second,Canada has many world Heritage.
I want to see a beautiful nature.
For these reasons,I want to go Canada.

回答No.3

skydaddy

I want to go Canada.
=> go to Canada
I want to go to Canada.

There are two reasons.
=> OK

First,I am interested Canada’s food culture.
=> コンマの後ろはスペースが必要です。言い回しは下記のような感じかと。
　　First (of all), I am interested in Canadian food culture.

Canada is famous for salmon and berry.
=> OK

I want to eat many delicious soul meals in Canada.
=> soul meals よりsoul foods の方が一般的かと
I want to eat many delicious soul foods in Canada.

Second,Canada has many world Heritage.
=> コンマの後ろにはスペースが必要。
　Heritageは通常小文字で非可算名詞ですが、UNESCOの世界文化遺産ならWorldのwも大文字にしてmanyでOK。UNESCOも入れた方が判りやすいかも
　Second, Canada has many UNESCO World Heritage.

I want to see a beautiful nature.
=> natureは非可算名詞（数えられない名詞）なのでa は不要。
I want to see beautiful nature.

For these reasons,I want to go Canada.
=> コンマの後ろにはスペースが必要。go to Canada。
　　For these reasons, I want to go to Canada.

回答No.2

SPS700

１。I want to go Canada.
２。There are two reasons.
３。First,I am interested Canada’s food culture.
４。Canada is famous for salmon and berry.
５。I want to eat many delicious soul meals in Canada.
６。Second,Canada has many world Heritage.
７。I want to see a beautiful nature.
８。For these reasons,I want to go Canada.
　（い）１と８は Canada の前に to が必要。
　（ろ）３は Canada の前に　in が必要。
　（は）６は、heritage は非加算だから many が使えない
　（に）７では、nature が非加算だから a が使えない
https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/nature

回答No.1

Nakay702

以下のとおりお答えします。
＞First,I am interested Canada’s food culture.
⇒First, I am interested in Canada’s food culture.
（be interested in ～で「～に興味がある」。）

＞I want to eat many delicious soul meals in Canada.
⇒I want to eat/have many delicious and typical meals in Canada.
（typical meals「特有の、典型的な食べ物」。）

＞Second,Canada has many world Heritage.
⇒Second, Canada has many world Heritages.
（manyだからHeritagesと複数形に。）

＞I want to see a beautiful nature.
⇒I want to see that beautiful nature.
（「その自然」でしょうから、that beautiful natureとしましょう。）

以上、4か所の変更をお勧めします。
（なお、「カンマの後は１字分空ける」ことをお忘れなく。）