英語の文法チェックしてください
Especially, Australian people are more individualism than Japanese. We tend to care about what people think about. On the other hand, Australian is more likely to do whatever they want. Also, they value their own individuality. I do not know that was good for us, but I just changed my mind after knowing their thinking, and now I always do whatever I want to try as much as possible because my life can not repeat. Anyway, all of my experiences in Australia were amazing for me. The most unforgettable experience over there was learning to appreciate my parents because they always cared about me, and support me all the time. Now, my family is the most precious treasure to me.
なにか文法のミスを指摘してもらえるとうれしいです
お礼
大変的確なアドバイスをありがとうございます!!! 早速参考にさせていただきました!!!! 心より感謝申し上げます。