この日本語を英語に直すとこれであっていますか？

質問

ループ・カンワルさんについて紹介したいと思います。まず、私がなぜこれを調べようと思ったかというと、授業で初めてsatiと言うものを知りました。夏にクラスメイトがプレゼンしたときにとても衝撃を受けました。そしてsatiを語るのには欠かせない人物が登場しました。それがループ・カンワルさんです。彼女がどうしてsatiをしなければいけなかったのか興味があったので調べようと思いました。

I would like to talk about Roop Kanwar.
First, I introduce the reason why I made a research on this topic.
I had never known sati before I attended this class and I was very shocked by my classmate's presentation in summer. And then, satiを語るのには欠かせない人物が登場しました。(どう英語で表現したらいいかわかりませんでした) That is Roop Kanwer. I interested in why she must did sati, I tried to research this topic.

回答No.2

favo99

かなり自己解釈して訂正しました。　ごめんなさい。　一応参考まで。

Do you know about 'sati'? I'll talk about this topic and Roop Kanwar to you.
I had never known 'sati' before I attended this class and I was very shocked by my classmate's presentation in summer. And then, a most influential person who appeared for telling the story of 'sati'. That is Roop Kanwer. I was interested in why this woman did 'sati' in her own story, so I believe that my research can show you everything about it.

回答No.1

favo99

I would like to talk about Roop Kanwar.
First, I'll show you my research for this topic.
I had never known 'sati' before I attended this class and I was very shocked by my classmate's presentation in summer. And then, a most influential person who appeared for telling the story of 'sati'. That was Roop Kanwer. I was interested in why a woman did 'sati' in her story, so my research could show you everything. Thank you!