英語長文の添削お願いします。

質問

自分で余暇の過ごしかたについての英文を作成してみましのたで、長文で面倒くさいかもしれませんが、英語に詳しい方がいらっしゃいましたら添削をお願い致します。
英文で変な部分がございましたら、バシバシご指摘下さい。

　My favorite leisure is to spend with my wife.
　My leisure I spend with my wife change weather. When it’s fine, we make it a rule to go out sometimes. Since it is very tired with daily work, I would like to bask in sunlight and to reduce stress. There is the park that dog can enter in neighborhood. We have a toy poodle and go for a walk in the park with my dog. We spend to play to throw a ball with dog and play catch and eat a picnic lunch that my wife cooks early morning. If We become very sleepy, We can take a snap on the blanket or a park bench. Also, When it rains, as we can’t go out, we spend to watch movie on DVD. Because both me and my wife like American culture, we always watch Western movie. When we watch Western movie, we always watch not due into Japanese but English conversation with English title. Consequently, We can learn English with watching Western movie.
　In this way, I spend with my wife at leisure. Because I can spend the special loved woman, I’m soothed the soul at leisure.

回答No.1

ruirei29 · ベストアンサー

My favorite way of spending spare time is the time with my wife. How we spend it vary with weather conditions. When the weather (=it is fine) is fine, we have a rule to go out. Because my daily work duty is very stressful and tiring, I would like to soak up the sun outside to release the stress. There is a dog-free park in our neighborhood so that we take our toy poodle for a walk. We play a "throwing a ball" with him/her(dog)and do a little picnic for lunch my wife prepared in the early morning. If we feel like it, we would take a nap on a blanket or a bench in the park.

If it rains since we cannnot go out, we spend time watching movies on DVD. Becasue both of us like American culture, we always watch Hollywood movies. When we watch a Hollywood movie, we always watch not.......???When we watch Western movie, we always watch not due into Japanese but English conversation with English title??? that way we can learn English by watching Hollywood movies.

To conclude, spending time with my love makes me soothed in the heart.

僭越ながら、、添削させていただきました。あまり使わない単語などは勝手ながらはしょったので、、意味が変わってしまっていたらごめんなさい。もちろんプロではありません。ただの英語好きです。

ただ、できれば日本語でなんと言いたいのか書いていただけるともっと訳しやすいかもしれません。特に映画のところは？？？の部分意味が通じませんでした。たぶんサブタイトルのことをおっしゃりたいとは推測できたのですが。

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