英文添削お願いします。
英文添削お願いします。
October 16th ‘10
I was busy today.
As soon as I got up morning, I went to do rice-cake making.
As a mallet of today was bigger than I had used ones of past, my arm パンパンになった。
And it was fine, I was tired a lot.
After rice-cake making, I had to put a TV board together.
But I had just bought some parts for that.
When I got a call from the shop buying the TV, I was not easy a little.
But I had a promise with my friends to go out to drink, I gave up it and did it.
We met in grilled meet restaurant.
We bought a 50percent off ticket of this restaurant with an internet.
It was great and we would be full.
As the TV will come to my house yester morning, I had better go to sleep early.
It is almost 2 o’clock.
お礼
ご丁寧に教えていただきありがとうございました。 生徒がやる部活でしたので 特にいちばん最後の英文はとても参考になりました。