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問い:Do you like living where you live now,or would you rather live somewhere else in Japan or in the world? Why?
Answer these questions as completely as you can. Use detail. Make us see and hear and smell and touch the place you are in
,or the place you imagine. Write in English on your answer sheet.
I like living where I live now. I live in Gifu.there are two good reason why I like living in Gifu.
First of all, there is good environment for living. Urban like Tokyo ,it is convenient for us to live in. However, there are some environmental problems such as air pollution and water pollution and etc. In contrast, Gihu is clean air and water. Moreover, there is few environmental problems. It is confortable for us to live there.
Second, Gihu is a easygoing place. Urban are busy place. I like easygoing place better than busy place because I would like to act my own pace. I feel that people who live in urban are always busy and hurry. I do not want to disturb my own pace.
That is all reason I want to live in Gifu
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