1. If you would like to hear my honest opinion, I can tell you, but do not upset with it.
2. Next spring, it will pass 5 years that our company has been running.
3. The guy who sit in front of me. He wear black hat that is cool.
1. Tokyo is the most expensive city in the world: average price is three times more than USA
2. There are three main food which Japanese mainly eat: ramen, sushi and fish.
3 The three essential things for young people today: I phone, Starbucks and Pokémon. Do you agree?
1. Older people prefer fish to meat; conversely, young people like meat more than fish.
2. Hiroshi seem really enthusiastic about studying: however, Yumi just watch TV everyday.
1. If you would like to hear my honest opinion, I can tell you, but do not get upset about it.
2. Next spring, it will be five years since our company was established.
3. The guy sitting in front of me and wearing a black hat is cool.
1. Tokyo is the most expensive city to live in in the world: the average price is three times more than that of the U.S.A.
inが続くのは間違いではありません。
2. There are three foods which Japanese mainly eat: ramen, sushi and fish.
→現代の英語ではwhichよりもthatが好まれます。
3 The three essential things for young people today are: iPhone, Starbucks and Pokémon. Do you agree?
1. Older people prefer fish to meat; conversely, young people like meat better than fish.
converselyは一応言えるとは思いますが、ばっさりと削除した方がすっきりします。（その後のcommaも削除）
2. Hiroshi seems really enthusiastic about studying. However, Yumi just watches TV every day.
間違いではないけれども、Howeverが仰々しい感じ。
Hiroshi seems really enthusiastic about studying but Yumi just watches TV every day.
でどうでしょう。
以上でいかがでしょうか？
