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質問

I can give you a 10% discount code for the next month. If you spend over ￡1000 I can increase to 15% for the next month and then if you spend over ￡2000 I can increase to 20%.

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割引についてですが、この割引率にできないか？
￡1000以上買ったら20％割引、 ￡2000以上買ったら30％割引

前あなたの店から仕入れた商品がよく売れたから、さらに多く仕入れたい。

返事まっています。

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よろしくおねがいたします。

回答No.2

nochi3 · ベストアンサー

Regarding the discounting code, could you please accept the following rate?
more than ￡1000, 20%discount
more than ￡2000, 30%discount

I hope that I would like to purchase your items more than before, because I could deal in them much.
I’m looking forwards to receiving your good reply.
Thank you for cooperation in advance.

どうかご参考に！

参考URL：

http://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=discount+code

お礼

参考URLもいただきありがとうございました。

回答No.3

Ganbatte-masu

I would like to take this opportunity to thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you. Your product received a great review (or earned some good reputations.) in here. Therefore, I look forward to do more business with you.

As for the discount code your offered, I am wondering if these are somewhat negotiable. I’d like to request the increase of discount to 20% to 30% from (instead of) 15% to 20%. I sincerely hope we can work this out so that all of us are satisfied. I await your response.

回答No.1

terryG

Thank you for your letter.
Your product is well sold here, so I plan to stock more.
But I still want to konw, could you give me the dicount in this way, that give me the 20% discount if I spend over ￡1000; and then give me the 30% discount if I spend over ￡2000 ?
Waiting for your reply.
And wish you have a nice day.

お礼

回答いただきありがとうございました！
大変感謝です。