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ちなみに仮定法をつかっているのは指定条件下にあるので気にしないで下さい…m(__)m
If I became a worker , I woul d live in my home by myself, because to live with only myself is a variety of merits.
Of course, with my family I can save a lot of money : in fact It costs a lo t of money to live by myself .
However,with by myself I would
be free to use the time for myself such as shopping ,reading .,relaxing...and so on.
I would also can independent of
my family and grow as human
.
For example, I would try to make some food and manage to get earnings
.
On the other hand, I would freely can't use the time if I lived with my family, because my parents worry about me when I be in out till being late at night.
Therefore, I suggest that I choose to live with only myself.
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わかりました、どうもありがとうございます。