帰国子女です。ニュアンスで答えてるのでたまに文法間違ってるかもしれないんですけどその辺は自分や周りの協力を経てで直してみてください。
And then, we watched the video about "the street children" in or der to know the actual circumstances of children all around the world, to consider what we can do for them.
On that video there were severe and pathetic life of children that cannnot be compared with what I saw before were shown.
All had ematiated body and we strait knew that they are not eating anything at all. it is the good situation for them if they can eat once a day. In order for the street children to live each day, they do labor works as we cannnot think that it is the work for the children. Because they dont have a home to live in, they are spending the nights like on the streets and we knew that there are children dying from the heavy sickness like 膚病（わかりません）because the living-environment is too bad.
I think that when we finished watching the video, everyone had same emotions. I just stood there in utter amazement and at the same time, I was feeling really sad that there are children like them in the world. " Why thse innocent children have to be suffered?" I felt very regreted.
It is impossible for us, who live everyday-life in a comfortable circumstances to think of these strict life.
Because our life are wealthy, aren't we forgetting to have a sight to care about the people who are having hard life?
Please turn your eyes to the children around the world more.
There are children dying with the pain from the hunger and the sickness in this moment just now.
So now, you know there are children like them...What do you feel?
What can you do for the ＜innocent but suffered＞(こういうの入れるとインパクトありますよ） street children...?
最後の行は相当大事なんでゆっくりはっきり言って下さい。
特にinnocent but sufferedあたりからは１語づつ区切って読んでください。
向こうで演劇専攻してたのでこの辺は基本のことなのでわかります。
他にも何かあったら聞いてくださいね。
お礼
こんなに長い文章を英文にして下さって、本当にありがとうございました。 読み方などもアドバイスして頂けたのでとっても参考になりました。 絶対に本選にいけるようにがんばります！！！