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質問

Kevin: Hi, John.
John: Oh, hi. You back late, huh?
K: Yeah, it's just a friend get-together. Got some news. Hey, how about you? You enjoyed a movie or just watching her face?
J: No movies. She came in here.〈g〉
K: ... What's the matter with you? It's kind of too fast, don't you think?
J: Kevin, you got it all wrong. She was in the living room, wearing Mom's clothes.〈g〉
K: ... I'm getting confused. What's going on? Tell me.
J: Okay. It's just that she accidentally spilled coffee on her clothes at a theater, so I asked her to come over to get it cleaned.
K: Oh, that figures. Okay.
J: Kevin, you don't know the half of it... I mean... It turns out that they haven't actually met yet but... they know each other.
K: ... Wait a second... Now I remember that she's been having a part-time job at a coffee shop. I heard that today. So maybe it's just because Mom was a regular customer. Right?
J: Close. She was not "regular", but "good enough to remember".
K: Which means?
J: Mom was the customer who spilled coffee at the coffee shop. And Alice was the waitress who took care of that.
K: Oh... So they are now even. Right?〈g〉
J: Yeah, exactly. Mom said Alice was very kind to her... Kevin, I found out she really is a nice girl.
K: Okay, good... John, consider yourself very lucky to have such a wonderful date, you know what I mean?〈g〉
J: Okay, okay. Thanks for reminding me of that. I'll buy you big lunch tomorrow.
K: You got it!

お時間ありましたら、お願いします。

回答No.2

Moreno

今晩は、
ご存じかも知れませんが、
http://www.jref.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=105
へ行けば、ネイチブの方々に添削してもらえます。
(以上)

お礼

こんにちは。

リンクをご紹介いただき、ありがとうございます。

回答No.1

kittenchan

宿題を無料で他人にやってもらおうと思っているのですか？

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お礼

これは宿題ではありません。

おぼえた会話表現を使って、自分なりに作った会話文です。
私は真面目に取り組んでいます。