ホストファミリーへの手紙
中学3年生です
短期留学で迎え入れてくれるホストファミリーに手紙を書いたのですが、どこか変なところはありますか?
添削をお願いしたいです
画像は手紙を書く際の参考として配られたプリントです
Dear My Host Family,
Hello!My name is 〇〇.Thank you very much for accepting me.
First,please let me introduce myself before meeting your family. I'm 14years old. My birthday is August 11th. I live with my father,mother and a brother. I belong to the art club. I like drawing a picture and playing games.
I grow eggplants and green peppers now. I like plans, animals and fish. I had goldfish, crayfish,crabs. My favorite animal is a cat,so I want to have a cat someday.
This is my first time going abroad. I don't speak English well. I fell uneasy to stay in Canada. But I'm excited to go to Canada. I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Sincerely yours,
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