エッセイの添削をお願いします
エッセイを書きました、添削をお願いします。
With the development of information technology, more and more people get easier ways to access valuable information than before. TV, radio, newspaper and Internet are main tools that you can get Information in every seconds and minutes. However, the increasing of information quantity bring about the increasing of fake information.
Internet is often thought by people as a mother of fake news, and what TV or radio broadcasting is truth. But, because of TV and radio didn't fully broadcast the truth witch Tokyo electric power company had made last year, people have hesitated eyes to watch the TV news recently. What's more, newspaper also have problems. For example, an article about interviews, under the limited of latter number, it ofter cut the interviewee's words. Therefore, people are easier to misunderstand what the article indicating.
From my point of view, every information senders should change their behavior. On the one hand, they mustn't send information with someone's private opinion. On the other hand, each senders have to choose information which people are really desiring.