英作文の添削をお願いできますか？（長め）
まずこの質問を見て頂きありがとうございます。
今回は題名通りの事で少し長いのですが英文の添削をお願いできませんか？
かれこれ2年程英語に触れていない中で英文を書く事になったので正直不安なのです。
ちなみに内容は飲酒運転についてです。
“drunk driving”is to drive a car after drink.
After this speach,I want you to think about this problem.
I'm going to talk about two point “cause accident and kill”and“lose social status”
・First “cause accident and kill”
Drunk driver may cause an accident. Because driver who can't right jugement when drink. and it may cause that murder person.
For example, Three years ago, Three children lost their life by drunk-driving.
・Second“ lose social status”
Besides, drunk driving have another bad possibilities.
For example,It is that arrested by the police. Recently the police inspect the cars at many places.If you drink and drive, you will arrest by the police.and this news is spread quickly for family,company,and friend.Then your social status will be lost.
Recently in Japan,policeman was laid off for drunk driving. Fortunately he was not murderd nobody .But drunk driving is a crime.and i knew this news two days ago.
・in conculusion ,i think we must stop drink when drive
です。長いし文法も単語の用法も滅茶苦茶かもしれませんが宜しくお願いします。
お礼
ありがとうございます！