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次に話しはかわりますが、みなさんの好きなペットはなんですか？
( 実際に何人か聞いていく)

統計的にいうと、TOP10は次の通りです。
(写真を見せな がら発表していく。)

最後に、本題とは違いますが言いたいことがあります。ペットを飼うことはいいことですが、ペットを飼うにはお金がかかったり、いろいろと苦労します。それで、保健所に連れていかれるペットが後をたたない状態です。
ですので、ペットを買うなら最後まできちんと育てる責任を持つべきだと思います。

以上で、私のプレゼンを終わります。

ありがとうございました。

The story is replaced next, what is the favorite pet of everybody?
(I hear how many people there are really in it)

TOP10 is as follows when I say statistically.
(I announce it while showing a photograph.)

Finally it is different from the main subject, but wants to say. It is good to keep a pet, but it costs money to keep a pet and has a hard time in various ways. So a pet taken to the public health center is in condition that there is no end.
I think that you should take responsibility to bring you up properly till the last if I buy a pet.

With the above I end my presentation.

Thank you.

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Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

★The story is replaced next, what is the favorite pet of everybody?
(I hear how many people there are really in it)
→By the way, what is your favorite pet, everybody?
(I will go to a number of people and ask this question. )

★TOP10 is as follows when I say statistically.
(I announce it while showing a photograph.)
→Statistically, the top 10 pets are as follow.
(I announce this while showing a photograph.)
△これだと何の写真かわからず、あまりいい英語表現にはなりません。
→(I announce those top 10 pens, showing them a photograph of their favorite pet.)

★Finally it is different from the main subject, but wants to say. It is good to keep a pet, but it costs money to keep a pet and has a hard time in various ways.
→Lastly, I have something which is different from our main subject. It is good to keep pets, but it costs a lot to keep them, and we have to spend our time and energy to take care of them.

★So a pet taken to the public health center is in condition that there is no end.
→So many pets are taken to the public health center, and this may not stop forever.

★I think that you should take responsibility to bring you up properly till the last if I buy a pet.
→I think that you pet owners should take full responsibility to your pets till they die once you buy ones.

★With the above I end my presentation.
→This is all for my presentation.
またはThis concludes my presentation.

Thank you.

以上、ご参考になればと思います。

お礼

とても助かりました（＾ω＾）