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If you could travel back in time to meet a loved one, what person would you like to meet and why?
Include specific examples and details in your explanation.
If I could travel back in time, I would like to meet my great grandfather who died when I was very young. The main reason I would like to talk to him about his interesting life. He was a city mayor. At that time, the city was not adequately-resourced health service. For improving medical care system, he made a great effort to make hospital complex. Additionally, he loved his family. Since he was very busy, he could not meet his children, so, he called to them from his office, writes a letter, and recorded his voice to let them read a picture book. I would like to talk to him about love and serve people.
お礼
おぉ、そのノリでしょうか? 確かにsoundは(2)文形使いますもんね。 プログレでも 2 [I[副]/II[形]](…のような)印象を与える;(…と)聞こえる[思える] とある。 彼は本当に驚いたように聞こえた(思えた)。 で、不完全自動詞は形容詞が補語として後に続く(知覚動詞系) ですね。 どちらもイケそうですけど、こちらがストライクな気がします。 ありがとうございます。