添削お願いします。
添削お願いします。
<What does studying economics bring you?>
The current economic situations gave me the idea to study economics. I am so depressed about the Japanese economy that I would like to contribute to the stabilization. What I think is important for the purpose is the global economic interdependence. Japan greatly depends on the rest of the world; they rely on our country. To realize these relations academically, I am going to learn international macroeconomics. Through the study, I am going to understand what the problems are and to find out how the issues are resolved. After graduation, I will work for the national organizations related to finance or economics because they have large influences on the whole economics. In this way, I will contribute to the economic stabilization and this is why I have decided to study economics. (131 words)
自分の書いた時の意図を書くと客観的に見てもらなくなるので、あえて何も書きません。大学入試の自由英作文です。よろしくお願いします。