英文を書いてみたのですが添削してもらえないでしょうか
The Green Mile
This movie was released in 1996, and it was nominated for four Academy
Award. (Best Supporting Actor, Best Picture, Best Sound, and Best Adapted
Screenplay ) The title means road to the electric chair. The scene of this story is on
death row in the 1930. 1930 year was an age of serious great depression in the
United States.
One day, a new inmate arrives. His name is John Coffey who is 7-foot-tall ,
and black male. He convicted of raping and killing two young Girls. At first sight,
John Coffey seems very ferocious, but actual John is gentle giant. Sometimes he
cries, because he afraid of darkness. Surely most audience think he is not man
who can murder young girls. However he was found by police holding corpse.
In fact he has extraordinary healing powers, who reveals by healing warder’s
urinary tract infection and resurrecting a mouse. When John is asked to explain his
power, he merely says that he "took it back. On that day John defy to care girls. John is
innocence. Regrettably, John was sentenced to death, so he can’t escape to death
penalty.
The director have much concern with John’s initial. John’s initial is the same
Jesus Christ. John was modeled on god. He tried to save the human, but he was killed by human. His life resembles Jesus Christ. He had said I was tired before it died.
Perhaps god thought so too.
This film picks up the problem of race, and false accusation. John’s lawyer
conceive a prejudice against black man. The lawyer thought Black man is the same
as dog. He said even if it is usually obedient, that might bite us suddenly. This idea was
general in 1930. It is not an exaggeration to say that discrimination to the black
executed John.
In the last scene, a hero says everyone walks in a green mile of the life. He
was 108 years old now, but there is no person who lives a long life in this age. He
was helped his sick by John, but he couldn’t save John from electric chair. He
probably received John’s life when he was helped. But he thinks his long life is
visitation. The prisoner wants to live more, but warder who enforces the death
sentence hopes for the death. It is the sarcastic one.
映画「グリーンマイル」についての文です。
わからないところはエキサイト翻訳を使ったので、変なところがあると思います・・・。
でも自分ではそれが変なのかわからなくて困っています。
添削お願いします！
お礼
nekomacさん、おはようございます。 やった☆嬉しいです。 『まめの模様は、まるで小豆のように見える』という意味を込めました。 脇腹に、ど～んと大きめの小豆のような、大豆のような模様が一つあります。 なるほど、こういう時はcoatを使うんですね。 模様にsprinkleを使うのは可愛いなと思いました。 とても勉強になりました。 冠詞は引き続き復習します。。 nekomacさん、いつもいろいろとアドバイスして下さってありがとうございます。 励みになります。