英作文の採点をお願いします

質問

独学で英語の勉強をしています
拙い英作文ですが採点と文法のアドバイスなどあればお願いします

(Reading books)makes me happy.についてのスピーチです
30語程度で書きなさい

Because, It can learn many things.
So, The world looks very wide.
And, I can a lot learns word.
And, Reading a books enjoy.
There are many books in The library.
Let's borrow a book.

Thank you.

よろしくお願いします

回答No.1

sknuuu · ベストアンサー

Because, <I> can learn many things.
So, the world looks very wide.
And, I can <learn> a lot <of> word<s>.
And, <I enjoy> reading books. (もしくは、reading books is fun)
There are many books in the library.
Let's <go> borrow a book.
Thank you.

次のステップとして、接続詞を使うことをおすすめします
I enjoy reading books. It is fun.
The world becomes wider because I can learn a lot of words and things.
There are many books in a library.
Let's go to a library to borrow books.