英詞チェックしていただけませんか？
大変恐縮ですが、
自分なりに頑張って英語の作詞に挑戦してみました。
近くに英語をチェックしてくれる方がいないので、
もしよろしければチェックしていただけませんか？
これを発表する日が迫っているので、できれば早めにお願いします。
Brownie
I said yes You said NO
This is the game of love between us
Feel my pain Feel what I feel
I wanna ask you why you left me alone
I did my best but you didn't do so.
I gave everything but you gave nothing
What's wrong with you? Am I wrong?
I'm thinking of you so much that I can't fall asleep...
Oh,what is true love?
I'm gonna crazy if you never come back
Oh,what is true love?
I'm trying to be a better man to ready for meet again...
The sun going down,the moon lights the town
The loneliness attacks me and makes me sad
"I'm alright,I don't care." said while watching TV though which was just a bluff
Don't you know why I want you?
That's not only your looks but all of you
Gimme your love Gimme your kiss
I'm thinking of you so much that I can't fall asleep...
Oh,what is true love?
I'm gonna crazy if you never come back
Oh,what is true love?
I'm trying to be a better man to ready for meet again...
Some birds in the sky are looking down on me
as if they show off their freedom
Gimme your love Gimme your kiss
I suspect that you start to love someone else!
No no no...
Oh,what is true love?
I'm gonna crazy if you never look back
Oh,what is true love?
I'm trying to be a better man to love you again
Oh,what is true love?
I'm gonna crazy if you never come back
Oh,what is true love?
I'm trying to be a better man to love again and again
Oh,it's time to go...
Oh,it's time to grow...
何かおかしいところなど、アドバイスよろしくお願いいたします。
