添削お願いします。良い表現もあればぜひっ！
My favorite vacation is that I go to a near mall with my friends or visit their house just for fun.
Probably,you think very normal day,but it is very precious time for me.
If we will graduate from university in two years 'time,we will probably live in another place each.
So,I want to cherish it's time with them.
Of course,I like other events which are festival,taking a trip,and so on.
Thank you for reading and improving my English.
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Dear. teacher
I am from Japan and live in Kyoto Prefecture.
I like sports. Especially,baseball is better than any other sport.
Ih fact,I played it and wanted to become a professional baseball player when I was a child,it was my dream.
But I don't play it now.
At times I go to a baseball stadium with friends to cheer my fun team.
I don' t play it there,but I have a another dream now.
すみませんがお願いします＞＜
お礼
ありがとうございます！参考にさせて頂きますね!