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質問

以下の英文なのですが、おかしいところがないでしょうか？

１．清潔を保つのと、ひつ世言うな栄養を追加することによって

How to way maintain cleanliness, add the adequate nutrition.

２．ほとんどの日本人は小学校の時に俳句作りを経験しています

Most Japanese has experienced making haiku when at elementary school.

３．日本では、iphoneがでてからappleは有名になりました

In Japan, Apple are well known when started come iphone.

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１．清潔を保つのと、ひつ世言うな栄養を追加することによって

How to way maintain cleanliness, add the adequate nutrition.
by maintaining cleanliness and taking adequate nutrition,...
by keeping things clean and having adequate food,...
by maintaining hygiene and getting proper nutrition,...

２．ほとんどの日本人は小学校の時に俳句作りを経験しています

Most Japanese has experienced making haiku when at elementary school.
Most Japanese have experienced making haiku at elementary school.
Most Japanese enjoyed making haiku at grade school.

３．日本では、iphoneがでてからappleは有名になりました

In Japan, Apple are well known when started come iphone.
In Japan, Apple became well known when iPhone came into the market.
In Japan, Apple has been very popular since they started using its iPhone.

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