英作文の添削お願いします。(大学受験用)
英語が苦手なので、文法や表現のミスなども教えていただけると嬉しいです。
【設問】
Who should look after the elderly -their families or the State?
(100~150語)
In my opinion, the state has to look after the elderly. This is why that it is difficult for families to take care of elderly completely. Take my home example. My grandmother is nineteen years old. She is not able to walk herself. So, we support her. However my parents come home so lately. They cannot look after her. So, I usually cook dinner and let her eat it. Then, I take a bath with her. When I finished all her care, I go to bed about eleven p.m. I have no time to use myself. As a result, I am tired. Moreover, I am often exhausted to daily care. Families such as mine need someone’s help. In short, it is necessary for the state to look after the elderly in order to protect their family.(137)
お礼
英語では例文が山ほどでてきます。日本語のページではほとんどありません。多分ネイティブ用語ですね。ありがとうございます。