英文のRecommendationのリクエスト。

質問

至急大学でRecommendationを提出しなければならなくなってしまい、時間がなくて焦っています。何か変だなと思うところがある方、採点していただけると幸いです。

Dear Professor XXXXX,

I am writing to ask if you would be willing to write a letter of recommendation for me. My name is XXXXX, and I am majoring in sociology with a minor in math media. I am taking your English class in spring of 2014.

The reason why I am writing to you is for my application to study to be an air traffic controller at The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Academy and the application due by June 13.

While I am in your class, I learn a method to organization that the writer want to say from reading bank discussion and to tell to other people briefly. In this assignment, I was able to get perfect score. It is connect to my future job. The people who work as an air traffic controller need ability to tell the condition to a pilot briefly in short time because the job control an airplane that one plane takes off and landing every one minute.

If this sounds agreeable to you, I will stop by your office hours to tell you my specific plan. Thank you for your time and consideration. I want to say how much I am having fun in your class.

Sincerely,

XXXXXXX

回答No.1

IXTYS · ベストアンサー

こんにちは。　　

留学の際の推薦状には決まったフォーマットがあります。　その英会話の先生になり代わってあなたの推薦状を作り、彼にサインして頂くのが時間の節約かと思います。

いくら英会話の先生と言ってもあなたが書いて欲しい通りには文章の書けない人も少なくありません。　そこをあなたが埋めて推薦状をご自分の好きなように書いて『盲らサイン』して貰われてはいかがですか。

簡単なフォーマットの一例を紹介します。　これを参考にご自分で色をつけてお書きになれば良いものになると思います。　あなたの語学力ならきっと朝飯前と思います。

Dear Prof. Dr. (Charles Jefferson)
FAA Academy

The bearer of this letter, Mr. Taro Yamada has been studying Sociology for three years and now he is a junior of the Faculty of Sociology of ABC University. He is going to study relevant expert subject in order to becine an air traffic controller at The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Academy and the application due by June 13.

While he was in my class, he learned a lot on a method to organization that the writer has to say from reading bank discussion and to tell to other people briefly. In this assignment, he was able to get perfect score. It must have a deep connection to his future job. The people who work as an air traffic controller need ability to tell the condition to a pilot briefly in short time because the job control an airplane that one plane takes off and landing every one minute.

Such being the situation, you are kindly requested to render your professional knowledge and experience to him so that he will be able to become the air traffic controller in due course of procedure with least trouble. Thanking you in advance for your full cooperation.

お礼

ありがとうございました。！