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質問

明るくて電気のいらない朝に１時間早く出社し
暗くて電気を必要とする夜に１時間早く退社したら
会社という大きな建物の中で使う電気を節電出来る。

回答No.2

ID10T5

If we, all of the employees, come to work one hour earlier in the morning sunlight with no illumination required and if we leave the workplace one hour earlier in the dark night with illumination required, we are able to reduce electricity consumption in the whole of our office building.

てな感じでどうでしょ。

お礼

有難うございました。
大変助かりました。(-^〇^-)

回答No.1

sayshe

☆　If we go to the office an hour earlier in the morning when it is so bright that no electric light is needed, and if we leave the office an hour earlier in the evening when it is so dark that electric light is needed, then we can save a large amount of electricity that we use in our large office buildings.

☆　If we go to the office an hour earlier in the bright morning, and leave the office an hour earlier in the dim evening, then we can save a lot of electricity we use in our large office buildings.

上の例は直訳になり過ぎているかもしれません。下の例ぐらいでもよいのではないかと思います。