英語日記7 秀才と天才の差

質問

すいませんが最近英語力のライティングをあげようと英作文をまいにち書くようにしてます。
レベルのひくい英作文ではずかしいのですが。できれば文法や細かい間違いを指摘して頂けると幸いです。

What is the difference between a brilliant person and a genius person.

I think there are two types. First, people who can do something with a lot of make an effort, which is called a brilliant person.
Second, people who can do something without a lot of make an effort, which is called a brilliant genius person.
Suzuki Ichiro is well known for a brilliant person. He is not a genius. He has failed over and over, but he has never given up in his life. That is why he succeed. I cant choose which one is better. However, I would choose a brilliant person if I could choose. It is because I satisfy a lot when I will achieve something. Anyway, most important thing is keep going on.

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回答No.1

bookaholic · ベストアンサー

What is the difference between a brilliant person and a genius person.
→What is the difference between a brilliant person and a genius?
→brilliant は形容詞ですが、genius はそれだけで「天才な人」

I think there are two types.
→I think there are two types of people.
→「２種類がいる」よりも「２種類の人々がいる」 がいい気がします。

First, people who can do something with a lot of make an effort, which is called a brilliant person.
→First, people who can do things by making a lot of efforts, who are called brilliant.
→出来ることは１つだけじゃないので、things が良いかと。
→make effort のように動詞を使いたければ　by ～ing で「～することで」
→人について話しているので、関係代名詞はwho
→「～する人は、○○な人と呼ばれる」→「～する人は、○○と呼ばれる」で十分だと思います。

Second, people who can do something without a lot of make an effort, which is called a brilliant genius person.
→Second, people who can do things without a lot of efforts, who are called genious.
→上の文と同じ理由で同じ構成にしてみました。

He has failed over and over, but he has never given up in his life.
→He failed over and over, but never gave up his life.
→今は成功しているので、失敗については、過去形が良いかと思います。

That is why he succeed.
→That is why he has been successful.
→何か１つのことに成功したのではなく、全体的に成功した状態、なので、形容詞が良いかもしれません。
→成功した状態は今も続いているので、現在完了。

I cant choose which one is better.
→I can't tell which is better.
→次の文で実際にchoose しているので、「どちらが良いとは言えない」ぐらいが良いかと。

However, I would choose a brilliant person if I could choose.
→However, I would chooose a brilliant person, if I could.
→言葉の重複はなるべく避けた方が良いです。
→if I could はなくても、「選ぶとしたらこっちかなー」というニュアンスは伝わります。仮定法なので。

It is because I satisfy a lot when I will achieve something.
→It is because I feel satisfied a lot when I achieve something.
→satisfy は「満足させる」。「満足する」はbe(feel) satisfied など。
→「～すると満足する」なので、未来形にする必要はありません。

Anyway, most important thing is keep going on.
→Anyway, the most important thing is to keep going on.
→形容詞の最上級はthe をつける。
→「やり続けること」なので、不定詞。

残りの文は良いと思います☆
ご参考まで。