shared talkの自己紹介文について
shared talk（≒exchange llesson?)を始めようと思いまして、登録の際に、
自己紹介文をかいたのですが、文法そのほかなんでも、
間違いがあればお教えいただけないでしょうか？
なお、もっとこういう英語の内容にしたほうがいよ、
とかももしありましたらお教えいただければ幸いです。すごく助かります。
下記が英語です。よろしくお願いします。
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Hi, there! Konnichiwa! My name is Daisuke, so call me Daisuke.
I am a friendly person so I think we can have a lot of fun here.
One of My hobbies: is listening to music
For example: 8 bit music (techno pop: especially kraftwerk and ymo), New Order , KLF , Ultravox, Cluster and Karlheinz Stockhausen. And other hobbies are
Contemporary art,. web programming (using LAMP), reading/writing TANKA(similar to HAIKU), and many other things.
Btw, I am a web programmer so often see English web pages and talk with English-speaking people. That’s why I wanna try Shared Talk here.
Of course, I will do my best to teach you Japanese.
I have not taken toeic or toefl. But I went to Tokyo univ. (most difficult to enter i Japan), so we can have the shared talk in a joyful way. So feel free to contact me :-)
I am looking forward to having nice time with you. See you :-)
