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質問

XXはアメリカの政治家で、ミシガン州議会議事堂第7地区を代表する共和党下院議員である。
彼は現在ミシガン南西部の代表であり、５回目となる任期を勤めています。
彼は最初の就任以来、地区（地域）の考えや心配事をよりよく理解するために、数多くの会議（会合）を開催してきた。

XX is an American politician and a member of the U.S. House of Representatives from Michigan's 7th district.
He is currently the representative of south-central Michigan, and serves the fifth term of office.
Since his first assumption of office, he has held numerous meetings to better understand the district of thoughts and concerns.

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こちらの英文を添削してほしいです。
よろしくお願いします。

回答No.2

Nakay702 · ベストアンサー

以下のとおりお答えします。かなりよく訳されていると思います。
（個々の文ごとに、お訳の英文・語句・添削文の順に列挙します。）

＞XX is an American politician and a member of the U.S. House of Representatives from Michigan's 7th district.
＊ミシガン州（議会議事堂）第7地区のカッコ内は不要ですね。
＊米国共和党下院議員：a Republican member of the U.S. House of Representatives。
⇒XX is an American politician and a Republican member of the U.S. House of Representatives from Michigan's 7th district.

＞He is currently the representative of south-central Michigan, and serves the fifth term of office.
＊ミシガン南西部：south-western Michigan。（south-central は「南中部」！）。
⇒He is currently the representative of south-western Michigan, and serves the fifth term of office.

＞Since his first assumption of office, he has held numerous meetings to better understand the district of thoughts and concerns.
＊～をよりよく理解するために：to understand better ～。
⇒Since his first assumption of office, he has held numerous meetings to understand better the district of thoughts and concerns.

お礼

回答ありがとうございます！
本当ですね。central だと中部ですね。笑

添削ありがとうございます！
大変参考になりました！！

回答No.1

SPS700

１。XX is an American politician and a member of the U.S. House of Representatives from Michigan's 7th district.

　このままでもいいですが、読む人がアメリカ人なら、XX is an American politician and a Congress man from Michigan's 7th district.
と短縮もできます。

２。He is currently a representative of south-central Michigan, and serves the fifth term of office.

下院議員が複数いれば、不定冠詞の方が安全です。

３。Since his first assumption of office, he has held numerous meetings to better understand the district of thoughts and concerns.

　でも通じます。

Since he took his office, he has held numerous meetings to understand opinions and ideas of his constituent. とも。
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=constituent

お礼

回答ありがとうございます。
就任はtook his officeでも表せられるんですね。
そして最後の opinions and ideas of his constituent.
色々言い方（表現方法）があるんですね…。
勉強になりました！
ありがとうございます。