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I'll live my life to the fullest so that I would have no regrets even if I died.

(いつ死んでも後悔しないように、日々を精一杯生きる。)

回答No.3

noname#202629

NO2で示した例題は構文が違うのでよくないが、下記の文章であれば納得してもらえるでしょう。

http://www.bianc.net/government_and_policy/current_issues_and_pending_legislation/index.html

Recent Issues and Pending Legislation - Brain Injury Association of ...

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回答No.2

noname#202629

I have no regret even if I die. (Zero conditonal)
I will have no reget even if I die. (1st conditional)
I would have no regret even if I died. (2nd conditonal)

意味の違いはあれど、1stも2ndも仮定法であるが故に、未来のことでも過去のことを話しているわけではない。ifをwhenと置き換えが出来るZero Conditionalと時制は同じだと思う。

故に、
I'll live my life to the fullest so that I have no regret even if I die.
と、
I'll live my life to the fullest so that I would have no regret even if I died.
は同じ時制と解釈となるはずですよね。

正しい文章であると思いますよ。

11:15 a.m. Hank Coxe ・・・・・
I will assure you if I were standing where you are, behind that podium, I would be pointing out the same issues and making this precise argument because they fit the facts of this case."

Read more at Jacksonville.com: http://jacksonville.com/news/crime/2014-02-12/story/3-former-fla-bar-presidents-testify-jacksonville-attorney-kelly-mathis#ixzz2vqUN4qKN

回答No.1

shingo5k

I'll live my life to the fullest so that I have no regrets when I die.
I'll live my life to the fullest so that I'll have no regrets when I die.
のどちらかだと思います。