早稲田法学部の英作文2002の添削をお願いします

質問

女性専用車両にについて反対？賛成？

リード文　I am against having "women-only"cars on trains in general because

"women-only"cars may make unfairness. this is why if "women-only"cars are less crowded than　other cars, men cannot take it, but women can, and if men take the "women-only" cars out of necessity, it can be expected that he is seen strange by women. So, it is obvious that "women-only" cars are not necessary.

初めて自由英作文というものを書いたので、言い回しがよく分かりませんでした

回答No.1

shimaenaga

ごめんなさい。内容がよくわかりません。
日本文を添えて質問されたほうがいいと思いますが。