…殆どの文に主語がありません…
First of all, I apologize. I am sorry to violate the age limitation of the audition.
However, I cannot give it up. Please let me receive this audition again.
I am a pure Japanese who was born in Japan.(この文の必要性は?)
I had been learning the piano for ten years from 5 to 15 years old.
In the junior high school, I had been taking charge of the trumpet during three years in the music for wind instruments part.
Because I am involved in musical instruments for a long time, the rhythm feeling is confident.
The motor coordination is confident, too. I am experiencing the ace in the physical exercise club, the captain in the badminton club, and table tennis. (この文、エース・キャプテンは不要だと思います→Especially, I am good at gymnastics, badminton, and table tennis.)
Additionally, I am studying Korean now.
Please do not judge the audition from the age limitation.
If I can become a trainee, I want to make an effort more than anyone, and to learn a lot of things from the senior.
And, I want to go up to the same stage as various seniors.
If there is handicap of the age, I will learn a lot of things earlier than anyone and apply ability.
It is not halfway feelings. I am serious.
My best regards.
お礼
jm1985様ありがとうございました! 主語・・無かったですね。 英語だけではなく日本語も勉強しないとと思いました。 ありがとうございました。