自由英作文の添削してください ！
テーマ(自分の人生を変えた出来事)
I have been to the US and the experience changed my view of the world. As you know, they speak English fluently: the sound of the language is cool even if the speaker is Japanese. That’s why I got to be interested in foreign languages. But that’s not all. What is more important for me is an American attitude: they are seemed to like to tell his thoughts to others and can express his own opinions positively, unlike the most of Japanese. These experiences showed me attraction of studying abroad.
自由英作文の添削してください ！
テーマ(自分の人生を変えた出来事)
I have been to the US and the experience changed my view of the world. As you know, they speak English fluently: the sound of the language is cool even if the speaker is Japanese. That’s why I got to be interested in foreign languages. But that’s not all. What is more important for me is an American attitude: they are seemed to like to tell his thoughts to others and can express his own opinions positively, unlike the most of Japanese. These experiences showed me attraction of studying abroad.
歌詞や旋律には、時代や地域ごとに様々なバージョンが存在する。イングランドの古典音楽の特徴を持つドリア旋法と近代西洋音楽の短音階と同様のエオリア旋法がある。前者の方が古い形と考えられているが、現在では両方のバージョンとも良く演奏される。
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There are various versions of this exist in lyrics and melodies, every era and region. There has Dorian mode that has England classic music characteristics and aeolian mode similar to the minor scale of modern Western music.
Although the former is thought to be an old, both versions are well played now.
ドリア旋法、エオリア旋法をそれぞれDorian mode, Aeolianで訳しました。
こちらは調べたのでおそらく合っていると思います。
こちらの英文の添削をしてほしいです。
よろしくお願いします。
しかし実際のところ、ヘンリー８世がこの歌の作者であったということは考えられにくい。なぜなら、歌はヘンリーが崩御した後で、イングランドで知られるようになった詩のスタイルで書かれているからだ。
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In fact, however, it is unlikely that Henry VIII was the author of this song. Because this lyrics are written in a style of poetry which became known in England after his death.
・考えられにくい＝likely で表しました。
（色々な表現方法があるみたいですが、どれが適切かわからず…）
こちらの英文の添削をしてほしいです。宜しくお願いします。
下記の文章に間違いがあるのですがどなたか教えてください!!
1. All of the windows in our house were broken in the earthquake. (no errors)
2. A lot of the people in my class works during the day and attends class in the evening.
3.Many o the satellites orbiting the earth is used for communications.
4.The news about the long-range effects of air pollution on the development of children's.
5. Studying a foreign language often lead students to learn about the culture of the countries where it is spoken.
6.One of the most common names for dogs in the United States are "Rover."
7. A number of planes were delayed due to the snowstorm in Denver.
8. Most of the mountain peaks in the Himalayan Range is covered with snow the year round
9. The number of passengers affected by the delays was great.
10. Seventy-five percent of the people in New York City lives in upstairs apartments, not on the ground floor.
11. Approximately 76 percent of all the data in computers around the world is in England.
文章に合った語句を( )内から選び、is/areどちらが適切かを問う問題です。よろしくお願いいたします。
1.(Statistics / Linguistics / Physics)(is/are) the study of the structure and nature of language.
2.(Diabetes / Measles / Rabbies)(is/are) a blood-sugar illness.
3.(English / French / Afrikaans)(is/are) the official language of Namibia.
4.People from Canada (is/are) called (Canadas/Canadians/Canadese).
5.Approximately (60% / 70% / 80%) of the earth (is/are) covered by water, but only (1%/ 10% / 20%) of the earth's water (is/are) drinkable.
6.312×.5＋100 (is/are)(227 / 275 / 256).
7.(The United Arab Emirates / The Netherlands / The Philippines) (is/are) in the Nothern Hemisphere (i.e., north of the equator).
8.(Fish / Whales / Cattle) (is/are) not mammals.
is/areどちらが入るのか教えてください
1. Some of the people is/are friendly.
2. One of the girls is/are absent.
3. Italian is/are a Romance language.
4. Two-thirds of the food is/are gone.
5. The clothes in that store is/are expensive.
6. The clothing in those stores is/are inexpensive.
7. Most of the stores in tourist towns is/are overpriced.
アンフェア the special ダブル・ミーニング～連鎖
アンフェア the special Ｙｅｓ ｏｒ Ｎｏ？
アンフェア the special ダブル・ミーニング～二重定義
アンフェア the end
アンフェア the answer
アンフェア the movie
アンフェア ｔｈｅ ｓｐｅｃｉａｌ 『コード・ブレーキング～暗号解読』
これは、新しい順ですが、あっていますか？
正式名称も確認お願いします。
DVDレンタル開始順でいいです。
映画のみです。
英語で、その月の前半とか後半とか言う場合、"the first half of the month"とか"the second half of the month"などといえば良いと思います。
では、上旬、中旬、下旬を言い表すにはどうすれば良いでしょうか？
（beggning of the month とか late Januaryとかだと、表している期間が曖昧になるので使いたくないです）
よろしくお願いします。
（特に指示はないのですが）APAフォーマットでレポートを書いています。
たとえば、あるサイト（適当にFBIとします）から「1日に起こる事件の数」を参考にしてそのレポートに述べた場合、「FBIを参考にしました。」というのを載せる必要があるかと思います。
文中に載せる場合
According to FBI (Federal Bureau of Investigation, 2017), ~.
という感じになるのでしょうか？
それとも、According to FBI (2017), ~ . になるのでしょうか？
文中に載せる方法がわからないので、わかる方お願いします。
