「妹さんとその子供と一緒に住むようになったら、チャット出来る時間が減っちゃうかな?」
を英語で言いたいんですけど、
私が考えたのは、
「when you will live in your house with your young sister and her kids , will i spend less time with you?」
です。
間違ってるところ、もっといい表現など教えてください。
いつも回答してくださる皆様に感謝しております。
ペンパルへのmailです。ご覧になって直す箇所がありませたら是非教えてください。
お世話になります。
最近文通を始めたペンパルへのmailです。ご覧になって直す箇所がありませたら是非教えてください。
（途中、文章が抜けている個所もございます）
宜しくお願い致します。
Hello ●●,
How are you?
Thank you for your e-mail.^^
I like traveling abroad. If I speak English better than now, I can enjoy traveling very much, that is why I have been studying English intermittently since I was in my 20's.
I see, you wanted to say in Japanese "Are you a student or are you working?" like this?
We say it in Japanese, "anata ha gakusei desuka soretomo sigoto wo site imasuka?" or "anata ha gakusei desuka soretomo syakaijinn desuka?"
"Syakaijinn" means a person who has a work.
Anyway, I'll answer your question.^^
I am a part-timer.
I work for a company as a sales assistant tree times in a week.
I hane a question to you.
What do you want to be after graduating?
I have a few of foreign friends. (There are two Koreans, three Filipinas, one American.) And you are my first German friend.
Thank you for having interests in Japan.
See you.
どうぞ宜しくお願い致します。^^
文法だけでなくここはこう言ったほうがいいんじゃない？みたいなのもありました、どうぞ教えてください。
Education System of Two Countries
It is the common objective of educational system in any countries to foster its citizens to become productive members of its society. Every country has its own education system. Two countries United States and Japan have also their own education systems. After World War II, the Japanese education system was built based on American's education system, so the education system in the United States and Japan have a lot in common fundamentally. American and Japanese educational principle is similar; however, the entrance processes are quite different.
At first glance, pursuing university education of American and Japanese universities
appears to be straightforward. The basic system seems to be identical. Both countries
have two-year university, four-year university and technical school. Students enter
college after they have graduated from high school, or simply demonstrate their ability to
get higher education. Students can take any classes that they wish to take and they are free
to devote most of their time to education. Both countries put from 6 years to 15 years old
children under an obligation to be taken education.
Even though American and Japanese university basic system seems to be identical,
the entrance processes are vary significantly. In America, compared with Japanese university,
it is easy to enter university. Students do not have to take the admission examination for
entrance, but all students need is just submit the required documents like high school
transcript. So students need to get good grade in high school.
When students enter university, they are not required the good academic skills. However, it is
difficult to get units and graduate from university, because they have to show their good
skills in the class, so not a few students who can’t get the units and it take much
time to graduate. In short, students who want to enter American university need to study
hard after entering university.
On the other hand, at Japanese university, it is difficult to enter university. Students have to take admission examination instead of submitting the required documents to enter. For Japanese universities, it differs from American universities in that you need to take an entrance exam for the specific university. If you pass the exam then your high school grades don’t matter at all. In short, contrary to American university, students who wish to enter Japanese university need to study hard before entering university.
To conclude, while basically, American and Japanese education system are similar, the entrance processes to enter university are poles apart.
お願いします。以下の内容でエッセイを書きました。文法の誤りを教えていただけると非常に助かります、よろしくお願いします
尚、「200文字以内で」とありますが今222文字あります、最終的に調整したいと考えています
Describe why you want to attend an institution within the LDS Church Educational System and what value you will add to that institution. (200 words or less)
There are several reasons why I choose BYUH. That's because church’s institution. First of all, I want to learn from those who same sense of value.
Second, I made an impression on BYUH’s school characteristic “ENTER TO LEARN GO FORTH TO SERVE.” I want to serve people through after graduate’s work, hope to be of service to someone, and I have received kindness by many people, therefore, I want to return the favor. I believe that BYUH is the only school where teach me how to serve for people.
Third, I have an only child. He is my pleasure and my treasure. Being able to stay near the temple and have church’s friend would give him chance to nurture. Nothing is more valuable than this for us.
Finally, I am a temporary worker and very unstable work. I would like to snap out from my vicious circle. After graduation I will put my all into environmental job. My wife’s father have own company and he has some idea and products to make an improvement green issue. After I learn business marketing I will take over his company and disseminate his products widely across to the world and help to make change to better place. I want to contribute to the world as BYUH alumnus. For these reasons, I want to matriculate BYUH.
こんにちは。受験生です
私は来年一橋大学を受験しようと思っています。
そこで皆さんには一橋英語の自由英作文を添削してもらいたいと思います。
ただ、パソコン上でいちいち添削してもらうのも忍びないので、
１）論理・説得力
２）特筆するほどの文法・構文ミス
３）使える表現, 幅広く使える定型表現など
４）総合点（やはり一橋を基準としたときに、それは合格点をいただけるのかどうか、などです））
をつけていただきたいと思います。もちろんコメントだけでも結構です。
I think that humankind need not return to nature.
Some may say that humankind should return to nature, because our civilized culture has done too much harm to the earth and the world is faced with an unprecedented crisis. But I believe that there is a possibility that even our present culture plays an important role in the global environmental conservation.
First, the society where information technology is developed would lead to a paperless society. In this society we can lead a present life without cutting enormous trees.
Second, what the civilized are absorbed in is replacing goods into information. Goods need sacrifice something, while information need not cost anything. From this view, we are in the saving energy society.
To sum up, even if we keep up our living standard, we can dispense with the damage to the earth, so humankind does not have to return to nature. (149words)
読みにくい、稚拙な英文で申し訳ないです。
ぜひ一読した上でご指導お願いします。
冠詞については、ここでよく質問されていますが、次の文章がありました。
「塾」を英語でなんと言うのか、と思って辞書を引いたら、 a juku schoolやa cram schoolなど、出てきました。
で、例文に「私は塾に行く」でI go to a juku school.とあったのです。
「塾に行く」とは普通「勉強するために塾に行く」と解釈すると思うのです。
でしたら、go to schoolのように、冠詞がいらないように思うのです。
それでどうも釈然としないのです。
冠詞についてはほんとにわからなくて、こんな中学生のような質問でお恥ずかしい限りなのですが、どなたか説明をお願いできないでしょうか。
1) Both trays to be removed from place and modification to be done.
2) Maker to supply 3 Nos. new cover so that the defective ones can be replaced.
１）両方の皿はその場所から取り外されそして、変更（場所を）された。「これは過去形でいいのでしょうか」
２）メーカーはカバーを三枚支給している、それゆえ損傷したカバーは取り替えることが出来ます。
このような訳でいいのでしょうか、宜しくお願いします。
こんにちは。"I am afraid that" の使い方についていくつか質問があります。
先日、「AがBするという都合の悪い事が起きると予想していて気がかりだ」という意味を出したくて、
"I am afraid that A might do B"
という訳だしをしました。すると、AがBしたことは、もう起きたことなのか、推測なのかを確認されました。
この表現は、ミスリーディングでしょうか？ほかによい表現はありますか？
また、個人的には、過去に起きたことや、過去に起きてしまったようであることを、残念がったり、心配するときは、
"I am afraid that A did B"
(I am afraid that he failed the exam. 「かれが、試験に通らなくて残念におもう」とか)
"I am afraid that A might have done B" (I am afraid that she might have broken his heart. 「彼女が彼を振ってしまったかもしれないと心配だ」 )
のように思ったのですが、辞書や"afraid that"の検索を見ると見つかるのは、大体、
"I am afraid that I cannot attend tomorrow's class" (英文検索・訳自作)
（残念ながら、明日授業に参加できないと思います）
"He was afraid that he might hurt her feelings" （英和辞書）
(かれは彼女の感情を傷つけるのではないかと不安におもった)
"I'm afraid that she will fail the exam."(英和辞書)
(どうも彼女は試験に落ちるように思う)
と、(ある時点から)将来のことを不安に思ったり残念がる用法しかないようにも見受けられます。
http://tatoeba.fr/eng/sentence_comments/show/51175
などと過去完了のthat節と使われる例も一応見かけますが、afraid that を使って過去のことを残念がる述べる一般的ではないのでしょうか？
そのときは、"I am sorry that A did B", "Unfortunately A seems to have done B" ぐらいになるのでしょうか？
込み入っていて申し訳ありませんが、片方でもよいので答えを待っています。
よく女の人が彼のそっけない態度や、そのつどそのつどの彼氏の態度に不満をもったときに、その時言わずためてためて、そのためてる間にわざと自分も冷めた態度とってしまったりしますよね？その態度を彼がみて彼はちょっとおこったりという展開になるとおもいますが、
私はそういうタイプで、
いま喧嘩をしてる彼にこれを説明したいのですがどう英語で説明していいのかわかりません。こういうのは英語の単語であるのでしょうか？
I CANT CONTROL MYSELF WHEN I .... I ACT ..すみませんほんとにわかりませんでした
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