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Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea?
I don't think this is good idea that buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration.
Firstly, if people continue using lights for decoration, the cost likely to get worse and worse. Indeed, electric bill is to get higher and higher now. Thus, using a lot of lights for decoration is waste money.
Secondly, using electricity is bad influence for environment. In fact, many people say saving electricity is a good for environment.
In conclusion, I think people should abolish using lights of decoration.
至急です！英検2級の英作文添削お願いします；；添削だけでもいいのですが、もしわかる方がいらっしゃったら採点もお願いします；；
TOPIC
Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea?
I don't think this is good idea that buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration.
Firstly, if people continue using lights for decoration, the cost likely to get worse and worse. Indeed, electric bill is to get higher and higher now. Thus, using a lot of lights for decoration is waste money.
Secondly, using electricity is bad influence for environment. In fact, many people say saving electricity is a good for environment.
In conclusion, I think people should abolish using lights of decoration.
至急です！英検2級の英作文添削お願いします；；添削だけでもいいのですが、もしわかる方がいらっしゃったら採点もお願いします；；
TOPIC
Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea?
I don't think this is good idea that buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration.
Firstly, if people continue using lights for decoration, the cost likely to get worse and worse. Indeed, electric bill is to get higher and higher now. Thus, using a lot of lights for decoration is waste money.
Secondly, using electricity is bad influence for environment. In fact, many people say saving electricity is a good for environment.
In conclusion, I think people should abolish using lights of decoration.
英検2級の英作文添削お願いします！！(；；)
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It is sometimes said that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion?
I disagree that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Firstly, museum's employee can run museum efficientry. In many cases, if they do allow entering museum for free, the cost is likely to get worse and worse. However, by collecting money from visitor, the will get enough money. Secondly, visitor can't see exhibit enough. This is because, if they do not collect money, many people visit museum. As a result,museum is flooded with visitor. In conclusion, I strongly agree with this opinion.
The only building there is closed.
その場所にある唯一の建物は、閉鎖されています。
この英文は下記の構造になっていると思います。
・主語: The only building there
・動詞: is
・補語: closed
there は the only building という名詞を修飾していると思いますが、there は形容詞として使われているのでしょうか。
The only building there is closed.
その場所にある唯一の建物は、閉鎖されています。
この英文は下記の構造になっていると思います。
・主語: The only building there
・動詞: is
・補語: closed
there は the only building という名詞を修飾していると思いますが、there は形容詞として使われているのでしょうか。
The only building there is closed.
その場所にある唯一の建物は、閉鎖されています。
この英文は下記の構造になっていると思います。
・主語: The only building there
・動詞: is
・補語: closed
there は the only building という名詞を修飾していると思いますが、there は形容詞として使われているのでしょうか。
While Smith had the musician impressed, he revealed that his mind was somewhere else at the time. “My concern was that I was going to get killed,” the King Richard star admitted. “That was my concern when I was trying to spit my game, but I ain’t really have nothing.”
"I was always faked like I had game. I didn’t really have game,” he added. “I was always in this full-on, trying to give the wildest flavor of having game, but that might have been the most terrified I had ever been trying to shoot my shot with Pepa. And I didn’t believe I had a real shot.”
翻訳サイトを使っても意味がわかりません。
よろしくお願いします。
「エレベーターはロープウェイの営業終了に合わせて閉まります」を英語表記したいのですが、ニュアンスが難しく困っています。
DeepL翻訳だと「This elevator stops when the ropeway is closed.」みたいな感じで、エレベーターが自律的にロープウェイの営業時間を察知して、エレベーター自ら止まるって感じがすると言われました。
正しいニュアンスで伝わる翻訳が出来る方、ご協力頂けますでしょうか。どうぞよろしくお願いいたします。
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Some people say that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree with this opinion?
I disagree that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. I have two reasons. The first reason is that it is stressful for neighbors. This is because such as dogs and cats sometimes ran noisily around the room. Therefore, neighbors feel stress by it sound. The second reason is that such as dogs and cats have a possibility to scratch the wall. As a result, they destroy the wall. Therefore, room environment is likely to get worse to worse. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with this opinion. (90語)
