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(1)If I could reach the stars,I would take one for you,
and it would shine in your heart forever like my love.
(2)Do you remember?
The way you hold me.
You looked into my eyes and said ‘I love you'.
You caressed and said nothing.
But it meant more than the chance to hold me and kiss my sweet lips.
(3)I'll stand by you forever.
(4)Love may be sometimes hard to show.
But I love you more than you could ever know.
(5)My love for you is as endless as the universe.
(6)Our friendship,love,and life together begins today.
(7)Our new story begins now with all blessings.
We roll up one page.
(8)Summer,the fresh air,the fregrant breeze and the flowers under our feet.
The blanket of stars is above us.
We dream in it …
(9)We have love to blind us.
We have laughter to unwind us.
Because we have fate to find each other.
(10)We exchange an eternal promise and bigin to walk.
(11)I pledge my self to love,respect and sincerity.
(12)I love you from the bottom of my heart.
I may not always show it but I do love you.