英語が得意な方に質問（ショッピング）

質問

(1)半額で売ってくれませんか？
(2)２０％offで売ってくれませんか？
(3)半額なら買います
(4)○○ドルまで安くなりませんか？
(5)ほかの店もみてみます
(6)これを省いたらいくらになりますか？
(7)２つ買うので○○ドルにしてください
(8)もう、欲しくなくなりました
(9)これを２個でいくらですか？

自分の考え
(1)Would you sell it to me for half price.?
(2)Would you sell it to me for 20 % off?
(3)I'll take it if it cost half price.
(4)Would you make a discount to ○○dollars?
(5)I’ｌｌ　look into other shops.
(6)How much is it without this?
(7)？？？
(8)I haven't wanted it.
(9)How much is this for two?

間違いの訂正（前置詞とか）、
もっと自然な英語のアドバイスをお願いします

回答No.1

cincinnati · ベストアンサー

(1)Would you sell it to me for half price.?　
Would you sell it to me at half price? あるいは　Please give me 50& discount.

(2)Would you sell it to me for 20 % off?
Would you sell it to me at 20% off? あるいは　Give me 20 % discount.
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(3)I'll take it if it cost half price.
I will take it if you make it half priced.

(4)Would you make a discount to ○○dollars?
Would you give me XX dollars discount (あるいはXX dollars off)?

(5)I’ｌｌ　look into other shops.
I'll take a look at the other stops. あるいは I will look around some shops.

(6)How much is it without this?
How much will it be if I omit this item?

(7)？？？
Would you make them xx dollars since I am going to buy two pieces?

(8) I haven't wanted it.
I don't want it any more.

(9)How much is this for two?
If I buy two pieces, how much are those?

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