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My Experience in Cairns: A Surprising Discovery
- I recently started writing English compositions every day to improve my writing skills. It can be embarrassing to write at a lower level, so I would appreciate it if you could point out any grammar or small mistakes.
- During my first visit to Australia, I experienced a sense of time moving slowly in Cairns. As a popular tourist city, it attracts people from all over the world and has a similar vibe to Hawaii. However, there were a few things that surprised me. Firstly, I witnessed someone walking around shirtless, which would be considered unusual and potentially illegal in my home country. Additionally, I noticed that many people in Cairns have tattoos, which contrasts with the negative perception of tattoos in my country, where they are often associated with gangs. Despite these surprises, I found Cairns to be a friendly city with affordable commodities, making it a place where it is easy to live.
- In my quest to improve my English writing skills, I have been writing daily compositions. Despite the embarrassment of writing at a lower level, I hope to receive feedback on grammar and other minor mistakes. During my first visit to Australia, I discovered that time seemed to move slowly in Cairns, a popular tourist city similar to Hawaii. However, I was surprised by some cultural differences. Witnessing someone walking shirtless, which would be frowned upon in my home country, was quite unexpected. I also noticed that many people in Cairns have tattoos, a contrast to the negative perception of tattoos back home. Overall, despite these surprises, I found Cairns to be a welcoming city with affordable living options.
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I have been there when I came to Australia first time. Cairns - I have been there when I visited Australia first time. 『英語はコミュニケーションの言葉で日本語は相手の気持ちを探る言葉です。最初からthereと書かれてもきょとんとした感じ。ですから町の名を書き出しにおいてみました。この叙文(イントロ)は日本語の場合は良いですね～』 I think that the time flows really slowly in Cairns. 『the time flows really slowly = the time flows very slowly か time goes by so slowly がいいです。』 This is because Cairns is a kind of tourist city. It may look like Hawaii. 『It may look like Hawaii.を下の文からここに移しました。tourist cityを説明するために』 Many people are coming from all over the world. People come here from all over the world to enjoy his small tropical city. 『町の風景などを書いたらもっと読者に興味を与えるチャンス - 何かもっとかいてみたら？』 『上記は町についてのパラグラフでしたね。下記はcultural differencesで新しいパラグラフなので最初にはっきりしましょう。cultural shockを受けたと書き出しそして二つの例をあげる』 I was stunned at some of the things I saw there. It was cultural shock to me. For example, some people walked down the street half-naked. If it was happening in Japan, someone would have called police and be arrested. Another example is that many men and women have tattoos. My mother had told me before I left to Australia, “You mustn’t get tattoos.” 『最後に町の良い印象で終わりましょう』 Cairns is small city but people are good and commodity price is not expensive. 『People in Cairns are nice and friendly. In addition, the weather is pleasant, and living cost is reasonable. としたらどうでしょうか。commodity priceは日常生活ではつかいません、貿易や取引などでは使われます(commodity market, commodities trading)』 Cairns is one of the city that live easily. 『Cairns is one of the city all about laid-back attitude and easy living. 』 まあ、こんな程度でどうでしょうか？間違っていると思いますか回答が入ってなかったので私がチャレンジしてみました。今日始めてこのサイトに登録したので回答をインプットできるようになった次第です。私も一年前から独学。あなたの英語はとってもいいですよ。お互いがんばりましょうね。
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