英語日記２ 東日本大震災

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英語日記２ 東日本大震災
すいませんが最近英語力のライティングをあげようと英作文をまいにち書くようにしてます。
レベルのひくい英作文ではずかしいのですが。できれば文法や細かい間違いを指摘して頂けると幸いす。

What can we do now about the severe earthquake.
We are facing a great big challenging now. On the 11th of March, we had seen the terrible scene what we couldn’t believe it. But it was really, we are not into dream. Fortunately, my family and my relatives were not there. I don’t know what I can have a light to say it. But if I had been there, I couldn’t have escaped the earthquake. But please don’t forget. We had been able to get over more big challenges. We can do it until we believe us. And think about what we can do now.

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bookaholic · ベストアンサー

下に書いてない文は、そのままで良いと思います。
よろしければ参考になさってください。

We are facing a great big challenging now.
→ We are facing a great (big) challenge now.
→ great か big どちらかで良いと思います。challenge は名詞で大丈夫です。

we had seen the terrible scene what we couldn’t believe it.
→ we saw the terrible scene which we couldn't believe.
→ 日付を示している場合は過去形。
→ what は先行詞なしの場合の関係代名詞。「～な光景」と先行詞へ繋がるので、ここでは which。
→ 上に書いたように目的語が先行詞として前にあるので、it は要りません。

But it was really, we are not into dream.
→ But it was real, we are not in a bad dream.
→ really だと「本当に」　real（名詞）で「現実」
→ into だと「夢の中へ」　in で「～の中」　
→ dream はいい夢も表すので、bad をつけた方が伝わると思います。

I don’t know what I can have a light to say it.
→ I don't know what I can say.
→ 「なんて言ったらいいのか分からない」・・・でしょうか？

I couldn’t have escaped the earthquake.
→ I couldn't have escaped from the earthquake.
→ 「～から逃れる」は from が必要です。

We had been able to get over more big challenges.
→ We have been able to get over bigger challenge.
→ 過去完了は「過去～もっと前の過去」の間の出来事を言うときに使います。

We can do it until we believe us.
→ We can do it as long as we believe ourselves.
→ 「私たち自身を信じている限り」 ・・・でしょうか？
→ 主語と同じ人が目的語の場合は ～ self がよく使われます。