英語の添削をお願いします。

質問

ビジネス英語です。
添削お願いします。

Dear, ◯◯

Thank you very much.
Now I will give you the details.

We have accepted your reservation for 90min course on Wed, April 12 from 12:15-13:30.

■ Location
◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯
* Room numbers will be given about 5-10 min in advance.

■ fee
90 min course　 ◯◯yen
+ option　　　 　◯◯yen
-------------------------------
Total　　　　　　 ◯◯yen

I'll be waiting for you on April 12!

◯◯

回答No.5

abiwirang

Dear ◯◯,

Thank you very much for your reservation. I would like to provide you with further details regarding your upcoming 90-minute course on Wednesday, April 12th, from 12:15 to 13:30.

The location of the course will be at ◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯. Please note that the room numbers will be provided approximately 5-10 minutes before the start of the course.

The fee for the 90-minute course is ◯◯ yen. There is also an option available for an additional ◯◯ yen, making the total cost ◯◯ yen.

I look forward to seeing you on April 12th.

Best regards,
◯◯

回答No.4

dedypraja

Dear ◯◯,

Thank you very much for your inquiry. I am pleased to inform you that we have accepted your reservation for a 90-minute course on Wednesday, April 12th from 12:15-13:30.

Please note the following details:

Location:
◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯
Room numbers will be given 5-10 minutes in advance.
Fees:
90-minute course: ◯◯ yen
Optional add-on: ◯◯ yen
Total: ◯◯ yen
We look forward to seeing you on April 12th!

Best regards,

◯◯

回答No.3

f272

Thank you very much.だけで終わらせてはいけません。Thank you very much for making a reservation.のように何かに感謝をしてください。
Now I will give you the details.でもいいけど，付け加えるならas shown below

> We have accepted your reservation for 90min course on Wed, April 12 from 12:15-13:30.

少し変えたほうがよい。
We have accepted your reservation for 90 minute course between 12:15-13:30 on Wed, April 12.

Room numbers will be given about 5-10 min in advance.で知らせるのはRoom numbersのように複数なのですか？

> I'll be waiting for you on April 12!

We look forward to seeing you on 12 April.のほうが一般的です。またビジネスでは「!」は使いません。

回答No.2

Nebusoku3

Dear, ◯◯

Thank you very much for contacting us. （Thank youの時には何に対して感謝が必要と思います）
Now we will give you the details as showiing bellow.（下記に示すように）

We have accepted your reservation for 90min course on Wed, April 12 from 12:15-13:30.

■ Location
◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯◯
* Room numbers will be given about 5-10 min in advance.

■ fee
90 min course　 ◯◯yen
+ option　　　 　◯◯yen
-------------------------------
Total　　　　　　 ◯◯yen

We will be waiting for you on April 12!　（I 　よりも　We　の方がいいと思います）

◯◯

回答No.1

Nakay702

以下のとおりお答えします。2,3か所、変更をご提案いたします。

＞Thank you very much. Now I will give you the details.
⇒Thank you for contacting us with your reservation. The details of this matter are as follows.

＞I'll be waiting for you on April 12!
⇒We will be waiting for you on April 12. We look forward to seeing you on that day!